Call that Kido?

*Sitting on the kido next to one of the many targets set up for other students to better their aim. I Yawn and see Itami enter the field.*
Itami!! Great timing. I want you to shoot with your kido and dont hold back!
*I smile, stand up and hold my hand out*
Come on. What you waiting for.

I enter the room and find Dami praticing his kido. He calls over to me and tells me that he wants me to shoot him with my kido.
"Are you sure brother? I mean you are exactly the best at kido and I don't want to hurt you.
I walk up and stand about 3 feet from him and sit down on a stump thats shaped up like a chair.

Yea i know but i have to get better so that's why i want you to shoot me.
*I smile*
So... Stand over there and give me your best. Only way to get better is being in a situation where have to to use it. So when ever your ready just shoot me. Remember the stronger you can make it the better.
*I take a deep breath and prepare my self mentally*

I stand up abruptly.
"Fine, but its your funeral."
I walk 10 feet away from him and take a stance.
"Get ready brother. HADO #33 Sokatsui!!"
I fire a ball of blue spiritual right at Dami.

Bakudō 39 Enkosen!!!!!!!
*A cracked shield appears and when the Sokastui hits it fail to block any of it. It sends me flying into the wall of the kido field*
Damn it.......
*I get up walk back over to where i was standing and look at itami*
Again.

"Dami come on man. I didn't even use an incantation and you still got blasted back. Lets just stop this before you get hurt."
I rush over to Dami to make sure he is ok.

*I push Itami away*
No if I get hurt it only tells my body to try harder. Thats how I'm gona learn this.
*I stick my hand out*
Im ready so hit me again.
*I smile and wait for Itami to fire*

"Fine! GAH and I thought I was the stubborn one, but I guess as long as I get to improve my kido abilities it won't really matter.
I walk back to where I was before and prepare myself.
"HADO #33 SOKATSUI!!
I fire another blue ball of spiritual energy toward Dami, but this time once I fired it I ended up dropping down to 1 knee.

Bakudō 39 Enkosen!!!!!!!
*Another shield appears but the bottom half is cracked and falling off fading into the air. That blast swipes my feet from under me sending me flying in the wall once again*
Yea that one hurt alot more.
*Seeing Itami winded i ask him*
Are you okay?

I get back up without a second thought of how I felt.
"I'M FINE NOW GET BACK UP AND LETS KEEP GOING!!"
I half growled and half yelled this at Dami, but only cause of how weak I felt after using the kido.

*I stand up*
Come on then!
*I stick out my arm*
Show me how strong that kido is and says it's incantation!
*With confidence I stand waiting for Itami to fire*
DO IT!!!

"FINE AND HERE IT COMES!!!"
I spread my legs to give me more support and hold out both of my hands.
"Ye lord! Mask of flesh and bone, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Truth and temperance, upon this sinless wall of dreams unleash but slightly the wrath of your claws. HADO #33 SOKATSUI GOOO!!!"
I fire with all my might. The ball of blue fire came out much bigger, about half of the size of my body. It was much wider and I could tell it was at least 2.5xs stronger then before. I dropped down to both knees and put my hands on the ground to keep myself from falling all the way down. My breath came out in short gasps.

*Using the last bit of my body's Reiatsu*
Bakudō 39 Enkosen!
*I full shield appears this time but the Sokatsui is stronger than the last ones. When the it hits the shield it quickly becomes cracked and showing signs of being destroyed.*
Damn
*A big cloud of smoke covers the kido field. When the smoke clears Dami is face first in the grass But when the smoke clears more to see the ground the burn marks are around him. I pick me head up and look at Itami.*
Shield didn't hold but it did its job. You ya think?
*I smile*
Im just gona lay here for a while.

"Wow. You're crazy you know that right."
I get up, and with some struggling, I walk back over the stump that has not lost its chair shape.
"I guess it did hold up though. We're both getting better at this kido business huh?"

Yea.
*I get up only to see the stump i was sitting on was blow away in Itami's last attack.*
Aww my seat is gone.
*I smile and fall back looking up in the sky*
We are gona be the best one day for sure lil bro... for sure...
*I close my eyes and fall asleep dreaming of me and Itami standing next to each other is a captions only meeting.*

I look over to find Dami asleep in the burnt grass.
"He sure is something."
I get up to leave as my training is a long way from being over and I must push myself to become better.

ichigo 2 f ur posts is under 4 sentenses please fix this